Category: Writing

Hades and Persephone Unfinished

I was lonely. I wanted an alive wife with me in the Underworld. One day when I was walking the Overworld, sad as ever, I spotted a girl. I didn’t know then but this was Persephone.  Persephone was the daughter of Zeus & Demeter. I wanted her to become the dreaded goddess of the Underworld. I knew her parents would not accept my want for her. So I decided a more forceful approach would be more prudent. I kidnapped her and took her to the Underworld.

Once she woke up she looked around and ran.

Rime of the Ancient Mariner Part 5

I looked upon the rotting sea,

And drew my eyes away;

I looked upon the rotting deck,

And there the dead men lay

Question 1: Why did the poet repeat this phrase?

I think the poet repeated the phrase to focus on his feelings as he looks at the sea the same way as his dead crew members.

The Bridge Reflection

I would keep it in 3rd person as dead people can’t write stories.  But if I wrote it in first person I would have it in the perspective of the soldier because you could see if anyone else had tried to cross the river/lake.

‘First day on the job’, I think, ‘Why am I worrying?’ I see a rifle being taken off of the gun rack. ‘Oh yeah, because my job involves shooting people.’ They hand the gun to me and a box full of ammunition. I nod to my officer and walk to my post at the bridge. Hope I don’t have to shoot anyone on my first day.

Rime of the Ancient Mariner Part 3 Activities

I defined some of the unusual words in the text.

Wist – past tense of wit

Unslaked – To not desire

Agape – wide open

Gramercy – thanks

Weal – well-being

Keel – structure made out of steel or timber along the base of the ship to support it

Betwixt – between

Watersprite – a supernatural legendary creature, commonly deceived as a ghostly elf-like or fairy-like creatures that’s small and inhabits water

Activity one: Underline 5 quotations that describe what’s happening in the poem and what’s happening to the setting, characters & events.

There was a weary time – this shows that the crew is tired

Gramercy! they for joy did grin – the crew is happy

The western wave was all aflame – I think this means that the rays of the sun are reflecting off of the sea.

Without a breeze, without a tide – I think this means that their isn’t any wind and that the wind is calm.

We could laugh nor wail – they were so thirsty that they couldn’t laugh away the feeling or wail and cry with a dry throat.